landyzhy 发表于 2021-11-29 22:59   全显示 1楼
我觉得节奏推进快慢倒也影响不大，相信作者在脑海里对整个剧情会有一个大致的设想和铺垫，反倒是我觉得侠客类的色文最近看多了都是凌辱虐情类或绿帽文，希望看到一些以剧情推进附议细腻情感文笔描写的文章，作者可以参照下十段锦等老文，但这只是一家之言，希望您能坚持写下去并越写越好
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