晕瑟瑟 发表于 2022-6-24 01:36   全显示 1楼
表弟绿母文比较少见，找了挺久了的，这篇算不错了，就是进度太快了，刚发现被绿了就马上摊牌之后然后舅妈就加入进来，没有过多描写表弟与母亲以及舅妈是如何发展到这一步的也没有写两位母亲的心态变化，内心活动可以让人物更加立体化，更有代入感，希望作者大大后面可以通过回忆的方式补回来，难得看见一篇喜欢的绿文希望尽快更新，谢谢作者了
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