大傻叉 发表于 2023-3-19 21:45   全显示 1楼
作者自己的感觉是对的，过于沉浸于细节描写，感觉跟记流水账似的，这种行文描写其实也得不了高分。看完后感觉真的是白等了几天，等等看第五章吧，免费的东西也不好苛责太多。
PS：感觉好像也是类似作者的通病，事实上你在这一章就应该疾风暴雨式的写，怎么淫怎么来，然后在王和尼那里再放缓。有点颠倒节奏了。
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